That's good. You may even remove the "Hiveism substack" in the text and just keep the foot note if this makes it more readable.
Since every voter can vote for only one candidate, votes are a limited resource that candidates compete over. This turns campaigning into a zero-sum game. Candidates with similar political values must compete against each other. They split the votes, which benefits their mutual opponent.
Thank you, your quote helped the article, a plurality votes as a limited resource does explain some of the current rancor.
People diss voting systems that have not yet been used in public elections, even though the two systems with the most current use, plurality and IRV, have been found wanting.